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英语作文修正帮忙看看这两篇作文有没有什么语法错误,帮忙用一些比较好的句式改一下,让这两篇作文升华!family rule

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英语作文修正
帮忙看看这两篇作文有没有什么语法错误,帮忙用一些比较好的句式改一下,让这两篇作文升华!family rules About every home has own family rules maybe the rules have litte strict .OF course,my home has rules ,too .first,children shouldnot allowed to go out or return home too late.second on school days,children shouldnot be allowed to watch tv or play computer third donot fight with sister or brother forth children can choose own clother ang making friends.I think the rules is parents's love for me so I don't mind it
英语作文修正帮忙看看这两篇作文有没有什么语法错误,帮忙用一些比较好的句式改一下,让这两篇作文升华!family rule
Family rules
About every family has its own rules,maybe the rules are a little strict.Of course,there are some rules in my family,too.First,I am not allowed to go out or come back too late.Second ,I am not allowed to watch TV or play computer.Third,don't fight with sisters or brothers.Finally,I am so lucky to choose my own clothes and making friends.Although some rules are too strict,I don't mind it ,because they love me so much!