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请问这语句是否通顺,该如何修饰?

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请问这语句是否通顺,该如何修饰?
I'll keep hard on my job,
I'll have a new life without you.
I don't wanna think too much
Let the time of day by day in the past..
Anyway,I wish you can be happy in the rest of your life.
请问这语句是否通顺,该如何修饰?
如果是分手想说的话你应该这样说
I`ll concentrate all my effort on my jobs not you
I`ll begin my newly life without you anyhow
and I donnot wanna think too much of our relationship anymore
The time can heal everything, time can change everything
Anyway, wish you will be happy in the rest of your life.