一篇500字左右的英语故事,我写了200字,求继续往下写,九点z q坐等!
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一篇500字左右的英语故事,我写了200字,求继续往下写,九点z q坐等!
尽量用一些简单的词,写完之后最好可以发到邮箱里,谢谢^_^(jiakechong@sina.com)写完的部分:Long time ago there was a old man,his name is Peter,he is a designer.He has a wife.His wife was very beautiful,she is a model.They live in a villa,and every day Peter design the dress,and Lucy (Peter's wife) often wear her husband gives hers dresses and take photos to show them.One day Peter and Lucy go to a orphanage with a volunteer activity.When they go home Lucy said:"I think I want to adoption a child.""oh,my god!What's happen with you!You know I really don't like children,they always make noise too much!So I can't do anything!" He looks very dreadful and angry."But ,they are so pitiful,they can't find they're father and mother.I think we should be do something for them.They need people love them."...Next day,Lucy take beak a child.She is shy with strangers.But she is not shy with Lucy.She likes Lucy,because Lucy is very friendly to her.After a time,Peter was went Home,and he see a child,he is not angry,he think if you angry child will cry,he don't like it.He looks very nice,he don't want this girl cry."Ok,Angela lets do a self-introduction." Lucy said.Then Angela said:" Nice...nice to meet you.My...my name is Angela." She's voice is very small.往下写主要是写peter对Angela的态度逐渐变好,但是Lucy有一天突然得了重病他们把房子什么的都卖了,还欠了一大堆债,peter也没有什么新的设计思路,但是因为Angela一直非常乐观,peter有了新的设计,卖的很火,最后还完了债,过上了以前那样的生活.
九点之前
尽量用一些简单的词,写完之后最好可以发到邮箱里,谢谢^_^(jiakechong@sina.com)写完的部分:Long time ago there was a old man,his name is Peter,he is a designer.He has a wife.His wife was very beautiful,she is a model.They live in a villa,and every day Peter design the dress,and Lucy (Peter's wife) often wear her husband gives hers dresses and take photos to show them.One day Peter and Lucy go to a orphanage with a volunteer activity.When they go home Lucy said:"I think I want to adoption a child.""oh,my god!What's happen with you!You know I really don't like children,they always make noise too much!So I can't do anything!" He looks very dreadful and angry."But ,they are so pitiful,they can't find they're father and mother.I think we should be do something for them.They need people love them."...Next day,Lucy take beak a child.She is shy with strangers.But she is not shy with Lucy.She likes Lucy,because Lucy is very friendly to her.After a time,Peter was went Home,and he see a child,he is not angry,he think if you angry child will cry,he don't like it.He looks very nice,he don't want this girl cry."Ok,Angela lets do a self-introduction." Lucy said.Then Angela said:" Nice...nice to meet you.My...my name is Angela." She's voice is very small.往下写主要是写peter对Angela的态度逐渐变好,但是Lucy有一天突然得了重病他们把房子什么的都卖了,还欠了一大堆债,peter也没有什么新的设计思路,但是因为Angela一直非常乐观,peter有了新的设计,卖的很火,最后还完了债,过上了以前那样的生活.
九点之前
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整个文我都改了一点,语法有错.我帮你改了,也写完了整篇,如果不行要告诉我 :)
Long time ago there was an old man, his name was Peter, he was a designer. He had a wife. His wife was very beautiful and she was a model. They lived in a villa, and every day Peter designs dresses, and Lucy (Peter's wife) often wears those dresses that her husband gave her and take photos of them. One day Peter and Lucy went to an orphanage for a volunteered activity. When they went home Lucy said, "I think I want to adopt a child." "Oh, my god! What's happened to you! You know I really don't like children, as they always make too much noise! And prevents me from doing anything!" He looked very dreadful and angry. "But, they are so pitiful and they can't find their father and mother. I think we should do something for them. They need people to love them."...
The next day, Lucy brought back a child. She was shy around strangers. But she was not shy around Lucy. She liked Lucy, because Lucy was very friendly and kind to her. After some time, Peter returned home. When he saw a child, he did not look angry, he thought that if anyone gets angry in front of a child, the child will cry, and he loathed it. So he tried looking very nice, because he did not want this girl to cry. "Ok, Angela lets do a self-introduction." Lucy said. Then Angela said," Nice...nice to meet you. My...my name is Angela." Her voice was very small but audible.
Slowly, Peter began to start liking the girl as she was very adorable and kind to people. Unfortunately, Lucy suddenly fell ill one day. In order to cure her disease, Peter sold their house to pay for the enormous cost. Peter was also out of ideas for his designing, partly due to his down mood and Lucy’s unlucky state. However, the lively Angela was always positive and she cheered Peter up very much. From Angela’s encouragement, Peter managed to get more ideas for designing and the new designs were a blast. They included lots of Peter’s emotions in them and they sold really well. Eventually they paid off all the debts and they got back their house. The three of them lived happily again, just like the old times.
再问: 谢谢o(≧▽≦)o ,如果可以的话能不能再多一点
再答: Peter has completely changed his views and attitude towards children from then on. He really appreciated the presence of Angela during the low and depressing period of time when Lucy was sick. Peter have learned to open his heart to children now and both Lucy and Angela were really elated about it. The three of them lived together happily ever after. 这段加在之前那篇的最后一句之前。那一句可以删除掉了 :) 不用谢
Long time ago there was an old man, his name was Peter, he was a designer. He had a wife. His wife was very beautiful and she was a model. They lived in a villa, and every day Peter designs dresses, and Lucy (Peter's wife) often wears those dresses that her husband gave her and take photos of them. One day Peter and Lucy went to an orphanage for a volunteered activity. When they went home Lucy said, "I think I want to adopt a child." "Oh, my god! What's happened to you! You know I really don't like children, as they always make too much noise! And prevents me from doing anything!" He looked very dreadful and angry. "But, they are so pitiful and they can't find their father and mother. I think we should do something for them. They need people to love them."...
The next day, Lucy brought back a child. She was shy around strangers. But she was not shy around Lucy. She liked Lucy, because Lucy was very friendly and kind to her. After some time, Peter returned home. When he saw a child, he did not look angry, he thought that if anyone gets angry in front of a child, the child will cry, and he loathed it. So he tried looking very nice, because he did not want this girl to cry. "Ok, Angela lets do a self-introduction." Lucy said. Then Angela said," Nice...nice to meet you. My...my name is Angela." Her voice was very small but audible.
Slowly, Peter began to start liking the girl as she was very adorable and kind to people. Unfortunately, Lucy suddenly fell ill one day. In order to cure her disease, Peter sold their house to pay for the enormous cost. Peter was also out of ideas for his designing, partly due to his down mood and Lucy’s unlucky state. However, the lively Angela was always positive and she cheered Peter up very much. From Angela’s encouragement, Peter managed to get more ideas for designing and the new designs were a blast. They included lots of Peter’s emotions in them and they sold really well. Eventually they paid off all the debts and they got back their house. The three of them lived happily again, just like the old times.
再问: 谢谢o(≧▽≦)o ,如果可以的话能不能再多一点
再答: Peter has completely changed his views and attitude towards children from then on. He really appreciated the presence of Angela during the low and depressing period of time when Lucy was sick. Peter have learned to open his heart to children now and both Lucy and Angela were really elated about it. The three of them lived together happily ever after. 这段加在之前那篇的最后一句之前。那一句可以删除掉了 :) 不用谢