你到过什么地方?什么时候去的?你们在那里参加了什么活动?那里有什么有名的好景色?那里有什么好吃的?请用英语介绍你游历过的

你到过什么地方?什么时候去的?你们在那里参加了什么活动?那里有什么有名的好景色?那里有什么好吃的?请用英语介绍你游历过的城市.
请尽快给出,今晚就要.
要用现在完成时的，不要字太多，80左右就行

记一次去北京旅行(A Trip To Beijing)
July 14th,2006 was a very
special day for me.I went to Beijing by train on that day.I was very happy
because I would see the capital of China---Beijing!A really great city in
China!
Beijing is one of the biggest cities in China.
There are lots of places of interest,such as the Palace Museum,the Summer
Palace,and the Great Wall……Lots of visitors from different countries come to
Beijing every year.
I stayed in Beijing for three
days.During these days,I visited many good places.When I was in the Palace
Museum,I really didn't know the directions.It is very large.People will spend
four hours if they want to travel around it.All the things in it are very nice.
Although they were made more than 500 years ago,they look very beautiful.When
we were in Taibe Palace,we saw a special chair.It was for the emperor and it
was made of gold.Each of the visitors said,"it is really nice," after they
visited the Palace Museum.
When we went to the Great
Wall,I was very excited because it is the most famous place of interest in
China.On the way to the top of the Great Wall,I ran very fast all the time.
When I was at the top of the Great Wall,I thought I was a
hero!
Three days is too short for me.Beijing is a
very good and modern city.I want to make it more and more beautiful.I should
work hard.I believe Beijing will be the best city in the world in the future.
再问： 要用现在完成时的，不要字太多，80左右就行
再答： 把过去式改一下就行，字多了挑着删除一点