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高中短文改错以下有短文9处错误,请指出并改错.I was only about six that he held his

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高中短文改错
以下有短文9处错误,请指出并改错.I was only about six that he held his hand out to me.I took it in me and we walked.Then I asked her,“Grandpa,how come you have so many lines on your hand?”he laughes and said,“Well,that's a big question!”He was silent for a moment.So he answered slowly:“Each these lines stands for a trouble in my life.”I looked at his other hands.“But Grandpa,what do you have more lines on that one?”“Because there are more the honors and joys in my life.”
高中短文改错以下有短文9处错误,请指出并改错.I was only about six that he held his
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I was only about six (that改成when) he held his hand out to me.I took it in (me改成mine) and we walked.Then I asked (her改成him),“Grandpa,how come you have so many lines on your hand?” he (laughes改成laughed) and said,“Well,that's a big question!” He was silent for a moment.(So改成Then) he answered slowly:“Each (加入of) these lines stands for a trouble in my life.” I looked at his other (hands改成hand).“But Grandpa,(what改成why) do you have more lines on that one?” “Because there are more (去掉the) honors and joys in my life.”