搜狗做题网我写的日记不过语法有问题希望帮我看
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我写的日记不过语法有问题希望帮我看
the dream is time to blossom
i lose my dream and myself for a long time ,even i can't remeber when it happen .so myl life is full of boring disappointment confused and so on.maybe you will say'' Don't worry,you are young now ,there is not one crisis you can't achieve .i think you must to have a good rest after trouble time ,you just eager for your vacation .please keep a enthsiasm heart anytime in anywhere.you will relax more then now."
but i'm sorry .that is doesn't meet my standard.i desire my lify is fresh.i'm hate that.but in one day.i'm find a funny thing on line .one young boy travel around china in 3 years for 90 yuan.that is impossbel for may people ,but the boy success it is can understand half of people ,but i know why he do that now .approtunity in front of my face .i will find the ture meaning of file in my travel
the dream is time to blossom
i lose my dream and myself for a long time ,even i can't remeber when it happen .so myl life is full of boring disappointment confused and so on.maybe you will say'' Don't worry,you are young now ,there is not one crisis you can't achieve .i think you must to have a good rest after trouble time ,you just eager for your vacation .please keep a enthsiasm heart anytime in anywhere.you will relax more then now."
but i'm sorry .that is doesn't meet my standard.i desire my lify is fresh.i'm hate that.but in one day.i'm find a funny thing on line .one young boy travel around china in 3 years for 90 yuan.that is impossbel for may people ,but the boy success it is can understand half of people ,but i know why he do that now .approtunity in front of my face .i will find the ture meaning of file in my travel
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My dream 比较好,一般the是指上文已经有提过的.
I have lost my dream .for a long time,一段时间一般用现在完成时
of boring and confusing disppointment,去掉 and so on,
you must have 去掉to
you will be eager a enthusiastic heart
that doesn't meet...i hope,i hate
i will find a.on line 我不知道你这个短语是要表达什么意思 travels
impossible for many people 拼写错误 succeeds 三单 后面的那半句看不懂你什么意思
My dream 比较好,一般the是指上文已经有提过的.
I have lost my dream .for a long time,一段时间一般用现在完成时
of boring and confusing disppointment,去掉 and so on,
you must have 去掉to
you will be eager a enthusiastic heart
that doesn't meet...i hope,i hate
i will find a.on line 我不知道你这个短语是要表达什么意思 travels
impossible for many people 拼写错误 succeeds 三单 后面的那半句看不懂你什么意思