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英语短文改错 Dear Sir or Madam,I'm Lihua.When I am reading the adv

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英语短文改错 Dear Sir or Madam,I'm Lihua.When I am reading the advertisement,I was grea...
英语短文改错
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Lihua.When I am reading the advertisement,I was great impressed by the job.I want to do something for the old.Therefore,I recommend me to you with hesitation.I am now in the summer holidays and have enough time to work for you.However,I have some caring experiences because I onced looked after my grandma.The most important thing is I am patient and the old in our neighborhood likes chatting with me.If I am admitted,I will devote myself to take care of them.I can read newspapers to let them to learn about some latest affairs.I can do some washing,too.
Looking forward to your early reply.
英语短文改错 Dear Sir or Madam,I'm Lihua.When I am reading the adv
1.When I am reading -----【When I was reading】
2.was great impressed------【was greatly impressed】
3.I recommend me to you ----【I recommend myself to you 】
4.with hesitation----【without hesitation】
5.However---【Moreover】
6.is----【is that】
7.in our neighborhood----【in my neighborhood】
8.likes---【like】
9.take care of ---【taking care of】
10.let them to ----【let them】
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