帮忙看下初一英语文章我自己写的,帮忙看下有没有语病,再小的也要挑出来!在线等!A seaside town----Hai
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帮忙看下初一英语文章
我自己写的,帮忙看下有没有语病,再小的也要挑出来!在线等!
A seaside town----Hainan
Hainan is a beautiful town in south of China. It’s the second largest island in China, it’s an area of 33825 square kilometers.
It’s a seaside town, and it’s a famous holiday town, too. It is very hot in summer, and it’s always warm in winter. So, in December,January,February,there are many people in Hainan.They think Hainan is a good town to spend the winter. I like Hainan very much,because it is a very interesting town, I can swim in the sea, and I can eat ice-cream everyday. You can see a lot of fish in the restrant, and I like eating fish a little.
This is Hainan, a beautiful and interesting town.
是作业来着……今天慌乱之中补的作业……真的写得很好吗……我自己都没觉得呢……
我自己写的,帮忙看下有没有语病,再小的也要挑出来!在线等!
A seaside town----Hainan
Hainan is a beautiful town in south of China. It’s the second largest island in China, it’s an area of 33825 square kilometers.
It’s a seaside town, and it’s a famous holiday town, too. It is very hot in summer, and it’s always warm in winter. So, in December,January,February,there are many people in Hainan.They think Hainan is a good town to spend the winter. I like Hainan very much,because it is a very interesting town, I can swim in the sea, and I can eat ice-cream everyday. You can see a lot of fish in the restrant, and I like eating fish a little.
This is Hainan, a beautiful and interesting town.
是作业来着……今天慌乱之中补的作业……真的写得很好吗……我自己都没觉得呢……
不错不错,但有一点小“瑕疵”,and I can eat ice-cream everyday.You can see a lot of fish in the restrant,应该用every day,连起来是形容词,分开为副词,还有restaurant,可能是你打错了.and I like eating fish a little.like doing sth.应该是表经常性的,但你却又说a little ,好像矛盾了,我觉得应改为I like to eat fish a little.“So,in December,January,February”最后的逗号应改成and.
总之,也是一篇成功之作了,
总之,也是一篇成功之作了,
帮忙看下初一英语文章我自己写的,帮忙看下有没有语病,再小的也要挑出来!在线等!A seaside town----Hai
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