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This movie is talking about a normal man,named Dummy.His life is a fake one.Dummy live is a big studio with hidden cameras everywhere,and all his friends and family,are actors who play their roles in the most popular TV show.He’s the star of the show but he doesn’t know.
One day,Dummy finds his life is a show.Everything is fake except Dummy.So Dummy wanted to leave.However,the director will be prevent him.In this world ,the director is god.Sometime,we even know what is true.Dummy was very courageous.He wants to change his fate.I am very envious of him.It is because Dummy have a happy life.He is a successful business man.He has a nice wife and many good friends.If I were him,I would enjoy this life.Although it just a show,I want to.It is because I do not have a complete family.Therefore,I begrudge other people who have the complete family.I once thought I was unfortunate but I was wrong.I appreciate this movie.It let me know nothing is perfect.In the real world,everyone has a lot of regrets.We should be courageous to face our life,like Dummy.Life is like a drama,but the script can be rewritten.
In This movie,the media can deprivation of personal liberty.They can confuse right and wrong.In this world,maybe all is fake,except our family.Family would not leave us in times of difficulty.Therefore,we must cherish our family.
This movie have many message.I will recommend this movie to my friends.
各位高手帮忙把里面的单词改成大众化些的，别人一听就会明白的那种。
例如：ordinary 改成normal
television series 改成 TV show

下面的有误,已改正.
1.Dummy lives a big
2.So Dummy wants to
3.the director will prevent him
4.Sometimes,we even don't know what is true.
5.It is because Dummy has a happy life
6.Although it is just a show,I still want to attend it.
7.It lets me
8.In this movie,
9.in time of difficulty
10.This movie has many messages