英语语法好的进英语作文帮忙纠错Under the sky of my motherland.There are many

英语语法好的进
英语作文帮忙纠错
Under the sky of my motherland.There are many animals ,many places of historical interest and many kind people.This is my mother land--the People's Republic of China.
As is known to all, China has a history of 5000 years,great culture but we still need we to learn.The Summer Palace is beautiful and precious.the Great Wall is spectacular and age-old .Caves, Dunhuang is morbidezza and classic. the Forbidden City shows the wisdom of the Chinese.
I want to do something to my motherland:I save water,I wear cotton clothes,I plant some trees,I turn of the light when I leave the room.When you ask me:Do you have done for your motherland.I can say:I've done.
I am chinese. I have gained black hair and black eyes.I have followed the virtues of my ancestors. I have a responsible citizen .I am sure, that wherever I go,whatever I do,I shall never forget that I am Chinese!
China is becoming much stronger than before . Our Lives are full of happiness.I love my mother land ,I love China.

这里是翻译,我那些用英语代表的,也就是我没自己接翻译的是好像有点毛病,我不是专家,总不能乱下结论,我写出来,你再看看,检查一下下.
译:在我的motherland.There天空许多动物,历史价值和实物people.This很多很多地方是我的母亲的土地-人民的中国共和国.
   由于众所周知,中国有5000多年的历史,伟大的文化,但是我们仍然需要我们的learn.The颐和园美丽precious.the长城是壮观和古老的.石窟,敦煌是柔美的经典之作.紫禁城显示了中国的智慧.
   我希望做一些事来我的祖国：我节约用水,我穿棉质衣服,我种些树,我的光转,当我离开room.When你问我：你有你的工作可以说motherland.I ：我做.
    我是中国.我都获得了黑头发,黑eyes.I都遵从我的祖先的美德.我有一个负责任的公民.我相信,那我到哪里,不管我做什么,我永远不会忘记的,我中国!
   中国正变得比以前更加强大.我们的生活是happiness.I爱我的母亲土地的全部,我爱中国.

还有,
As is known to all,这个既然是句子的开头,那应该怎样该:
although is known to all,
原因:as
[æz, əz]
adv.
同样地, 一样地
She is as tall as her mother.
她和她母亲一样高.
prep.
(表示时间)当还是…的时候
As a schoolboy, he showed every sign of genius.
当他还是个小学生的时候, 就显示出了天资聪慧.
(表示方式)以…的身份, 以…资格, 作为; 以…形式, 以作为; 以…角色, 扮演…角色; 如同, 像
(表示结果)成为, 看作, 看成
We had better treat it as a joke.
我们最好把它当作玩笑.
(表示目的)为了, 以…为目的
The dykes were built as a protection against the sea.
建筑堤坝是为了防止海水泛滥.
(表示举例)例如, 诸如…之类的
We talked about such subjects as the weather.
我们谈论了诸如天气之类的话题.
conj.
在…期间, 当…时候
I was coming in as he was going out.
我进来的时候, 他正出去.
尽管, 即使, 虽然
Intelligent as you are, I suspect you will fail.
尽管你聪明, 我猜想你会失败.
像…一样
由于, 因为
As you weren't there I left a message.
因为你不在那里, 我留了个信儿.
瞧,是吧,although总比as好吧?
嗯,Our Lives are full of happiness.I love my mother land ,I love China. 因改为: Our Lives are full happiness.I love my mother land ,I love China.
原因:full
[ful]
adj.
满的, 装满的
The train was crowded to its full capacity.
火车上挤满了乘客.
完全的, 充分的, 完整的
Only full members of the club are allowed to vote at meeting.
只有俱乐部的正式会员才可以在会中投票.
呵呵,显然full是形容词哦,那么形容词又怎么可能加of?
我举一个例子,让你更加理解一下,
快乐的玩,Happy Play
可是没谁说Happy of play 吧,
so Our Lives are full of happiness.I love my mother land ,I love China. 因改为: Our Lives are full happiness.I love my mother land ,I love China.
o(）＾）)o 唉打字很麻烦的,不过我觉得你英语水平不错嘛,加油!相信你是一个英语才人,would you like to make firend with me?I want to make firend with you!（你可以和我交朋友吗?我希望能交上!