搜狗做题网帮忙改两篇作文~关于奥运和地震
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帮忙改两篇作文~关于奥运和地震
这两篇文章里可能有好多问题,最好字数控制在60—80字左右.
The 29th Olympic Games
The 29th Olympic Games will be held in Beijing.As a Chinese I feel so happy.More and more foreigners came to Beijing.I hope they can understand Beijing's culture.Such as the Beijing Peking Opera and the food.I hope the Chinese team in the Olympics was more gold medals than before.I think China is the best.I look forward to the Olympics.
第29届奥林匹克运动会将被举办在北京.作为一个中国人我因此感到高兴.越来越多的外国人来到北京.我希望他们能了解北京的文化.如北京的食物和京剧.我希望中国队能在奥林匹克运动会上获得比之前更多的金牌.我认为中国是最好的.我期待着奥运会.
The Wenchuan Earthquake
May 12,2008,the Chinese people know about this big news - Wenchuan earthquake.In this earthquake.Many people left this world,so I am sad but I am glad to see that more and more People to help Wenchuan.I hope I can help people in Wenchuan.In the future,Wenchuan building will be better than before.It will be a beautiful city.
2008年五月十二日,中国人知道了这大新闻--汶川大地震.在这场地震中.很多人离开了这个世界,因此我感到伤心.但是我很高兴看到越来越多的人帮助汶川.我希望我也能帮助汶川的人们.在将来,汶川会被建设得比之前更好.它将会是一个美丽的城市.
这两篇文章里可能有好多问题,最好字数控制在60—80字左右.
The 29th Olympic Games
The 29th Olympic Games will be held in Beijing.As a Chinese I feel so happy.More and more foreigners came to Beijing.I hope they can understand Beijing's culture.Such as the Beijing Peking Opera and the food.I hope the Chinese team in the Olympics was more gold medals than before.I think China is the best.I look forward to the Olympics.
第29届奥林匹克运动会将被举办在北京.作为一个中国人我因此感到高兴.越来越多的外国人来到北京.我希望他们能了解北京的文化.如北京的食物和京剧.我希望中国队能在奥林匹克运动会上获得比之前更多的金牌.我认为中国是最好的.我期待着奥运会.
The Wenchuan Earthquake
May 12,2008,the Chinese people know about this big news - Wenchuan earthquake.In this earthquake.Many people left this world,so I am sad but I am glad to see that more and more People to help Wenchuan.I hope I can help people in Wenchuan.In the future,Wenchuan building will be better than before.It will be a beautiful city.
2008年五月十二日,中国人知道了这大新闻--汶川大地震.在这场地震中.很多人离开了这个世界,因此我感到伤心.但是我很高兴看到越来越多的人帮助汶川.我希望我也能帮助汶川的人们.在将来,汶川会被建设得比之前更好.它将会是一个美丽的城市.
The 29th Olympic Games
The 29th Olympic Games will be held in Beijing.As a Chinese I feel so happy.More and more foreigners came to Beijing.I hope they can understand Beijing's culture.Such as the Beijing Opera and the food.I hope the Chinese team get more gold medals than before.I think China is the best.I look forward to the Olympics.
The Wenchuan Earthquake
May 12,2008,the Chinese people knew about this big news - Wenchuan earthquake.In this earthquake,Many people left this world,so I am sad but I am glad to see that more and more People to help Wenchuan.I hope I can help people in Wenchuan.In the future,Wenchuan will be building better than before.It will be a beautiful city.
修改后是这样的,应该没有语法错误了,你再斟酌一下.
The 29th Olympic Games will be held in Beijing.As a Chinese I feel so happy.More and more foreigners came to Beijing.I hope they can understand Beijing's culture.Such as the Beijing Opera and the food.I hope the Chinese team get more gold medals than before.I think China is the best.I look forward to the Olympics.
The Wenchuan Earthquake
May 12,2008,the Chinese people knew about this big news - Wenchuan earthquake.In this earthquake,Many people left this world,so I am sad but I am glad to see that more and more People to help Wenchuan.I hope I can help people in Wenchuan.In the future,Wenchuan will be building better than before.It will be a beautiful city.
修改后是这样的,应该没有语法错误了,你再斟酌一下.