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dear friend i am sorry to hear that you was late for school that morning and were sieepy in class everyone makes mistakes. i think this is normal because you didn't have enough cleep the night before last . if you don't w ant to make such a mistake here is some advice to you . first of all,maybeyou should use you free tine to do your homeuork before you go home .such that you have alot of tine to sleep . as for you late for school ,you could buy some alarm clock .what's move if you can't finel your sclence book .you'd better to make the backpack . finally,if you really get up lote,you can take a taxi so that you can get to school on time. in a wovcl, i you will not make such a mistake, wish you good luck yours alan
写信人想征求读者意见,找到解决问题的方法。
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Dear friend,
I am sorry to hear that you were late for school that morning and were sleepy in class .No one is perfect and everyone makes mistakes .I think this is normal because you didn't have enough sleep the night before (last去掉) . If you don't want to make such a mistake. Here is some advice for you .
First of all, maybe you should use your free time to do your homework before you go home so that you can have a lot of time to sleep .
As for being late for school ,you could buy an alarm clock .What's more if you can't find your science book,you'd better (to去掉) make up the backpack .
Finally, if you really get up late, you can take a taxi so that you can get to school on time.
In a word, I hope you will not make such a mistake again, wish you good luck.
Yours,
Alan
最终答案:略