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Dear Li Ming
I’m one of the classmates of you, Firstly, welcome to come our school, I believe you will be happy to study. But, recently, I’m sorry to hear that you are having troubles in how to get along well with our, your classmates.
In my opinion, what make you difficult get along with our is too shy to talk with others, isn’t it?
The reason you fell more lonely that you are afraid of being laughed at.
If you want to get along with our. You should need more brave. Don’t afraid. You might learn as well as Putonghua . it’s convenient to communicate with your classmates.
I hope you can adapt to your new school as soon as . Only adapt to your new school can you study better.
Best regards
Zhang Hua 谢谢 老师 给出分数，给出 要升华的地方。谢谢 辛苦了
解题思路： 你是个很有爱心的好孩子，在竭力帮助一个身处困境的同班同学。你的作文思路通畅，措施得当。遗憾的是你在尝试使用高级句型时出现了错误，但是只要你坚持不懈地练习，相信你会很快提高的，要加油啊！
解题过程：
若按照高考书面表达满分25分评分的话，不客气地讲，你的文章很难及格。因为错误的句型有多处，可以看出你的英语语法学习有漏洞，希望你能专心研究一下必备的语法知识。作文修改如下：
Dear Li Ming
I’m one of your classmates , Firstly, welcome to come to our school, I believe you will be happy to study here. But, recently, I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble in getting along well with us, your classmates.
In my opinion, what makes it difficult for you to get along with us is that you are too shy to talk with others, isn’t it?
The reason why you feel more lonely is that you are afraid of being laughed at.
If you want to get along with us. You should be more brave. Don’t be afraid. You might as well learn Putonghua . it’s convenient to communicate with your classmates.
I hope you can adapt to your new school life soon. Only in this way can you study better.
Best regards
Zhang Hua
你在文章中尝试使用主语从句、表语从句和定语从句，做法很好，但要掌握基本的表达方式；你还尝试使用同位语和倒装句，这也是英语作文能得高分的亮点，在写文章时你还可以运用学过的过渡词；希望你能坚持练习，很高兴认识你。
最终答案：略
解题过程：
若按照高考书面表达满分25分评分的话，不客气地讲，你的文章很难及格。因为错误的句型有多处，可以看出你的英语语法学习有漏洞，希望你能专心研究一下必备的语法知识。作文修改如下：
Dear Li Ming
I’m one of your classmates , Firstly, welcome to come to our school, I believe you will be happy to study here. But, recently, I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble in getting along well with us, your classmates.
In my opinion, what makes it difficult for you to get along with us is that you are too shy to talk with others, isn’t it?
The reason why you feel more lonely is that you are afraid of being laughed at.
If you want to get along with us. You should be more brave. Don’t be afraid. You might as well learn Putonghua . it’s convenient to communicate with your classmates.
I hope you can adapt to your new school life soon. Only in this way can you study better.
Best regards
Zhang Hua
你在文章中尝试使用主语从句、表语从句和定语从句，做法很好，但要掌握基本的表达方式；你还尝试使用同位语和倒装句，这也是英语作文能得高分的亮点，在写文章时你还可以运用学过的过渡词；希望你能坚持练习，很高兴认识你。
最终答案：略