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作文,麻烦老师看看对不对!多谢
解题思路: 如下
解题过程:
1.They made us sad ,cry ,happiness and so on .改为:They make us sad , tearful, happy and so on .这样句式更整齐。
2.At the beginning of the new school team.改为:At the beginning of the new school term.
3.I have to go to home for 4 days .改为:I had to go home for 4 days .
4.I am very worried my subjects .改为:I was very worried about my subjects .
5.At the fifth days 改为:On the fifth day.
6.I’m too worried 改为:I was too worried .
7.I’m moved 改为:I was moved
8.I caught up the class改为:I caught up with the class .
9.Though it has been many months改为:Though many months has passed .

最终答案:略