搜狗做题网写作修改(英语作文)
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My vacation plan This vacation I plan a common vacation. I shauld take lessons after school,because my math does't really good . Every moming I should do my homework and horsework.After do that , I should exercise and eat healthy breakfast .Because my book wrote 'good food and exercise help me to study better ' .In every noon ,I should have a sleep and relaxing .In every afternoon ,my father help me to study math .His math was pretty good .In the evening ,I can play . I can surf the Internet and watch TV with my parents .In the night , I can read some interesting books . This vacation , I think I can knowledge for too much. 老师好：这是一篇关于假期计划的短文。 请详解哪里有错误？哪里写得好？并有哪些地方需要注意？
解题思路： 英语句子分析，句式的使用
解题过程：
This vacation I plan to have （计划做某事plan to ） a common vacation. I should（拼写错误） take lessons after school,because my math isn't (缺少的是系动词，因为后边接的是 good 这个形容词，属于系表结构） really good .
Every morning（拼写错误） I should do my homework and some （添加some 句子意思更完善） housework（拼写错误）.After doing （After介词接动名词） that , I should exercise and eat healthily healthily（吃的健康，用副词healthily修饰eat）,it says that （翻译为书上写着） exercise can help me to study better .At（在中午） noon ,I should have a rest （休息） and be relaxed（形容人放松用relaxed） .In every afternoon ,my father help me study math .His math was pretty good .In the evening ,I can play . I can surf the Internet and watch TV with my parents .In the night , I can read some interesting books .
This vacation , I think I can learn much （学到很多） knowledge .
本作文最大的优点就是思路很清晰，意思表达明了，句子结构用的基本准确，尤其后半部分基本一点错误没有。相信你再努力会取得更大的进步！唯一有遗憾的地方是：单词拼写方面的错误，这可能是因为你着急提问导致的。 老师期待你的进步的好消息哦！
最终答案：略
解题过程：
This vacation I plan to have （计划做某事plan to ） a common vacation. I should（拼写错误） take lessons after school,because my math isn't (缺少的是系动词，因为后边接的是 good 这个形容词，属于系表结构） really good .
Every morning（拼写错误） I should do my homework and some （添加some 句子意思更完善） housework（拼写错误）.After doing （After介词接动名词） that , I should exercise and eat healthily healthily（吃的健康，用副词healthily修饰eat）,it says that （翻译为书上写着） exercise can help me to study better .At（在中午） noon ,I should have a rest （休息） and be relaxed（形容人放松用relaxed） .In every afternoon ,my father help me study math .His math was pretty good .In the evening ,I can play . I can surf the Internet and watch TV with my parents .In the night , I can read some interesting books .
This vacation , I think I can learn much （学到很多） knowledge .
本作文最大的优点就是思路很清晰，意思表达明了，句子结构用的基本准确，尤其后半部分基本一点错误没有。相信你再努力会取得更大的进步！唯一有遗憾的地方是：单词拼写方面的错误，这可能是因为你着急提问导致的。 老师期待你的进步的好消息哦！
最终答案：略