英语短文改错,急My friend Harrison told me what he would like to be

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英语短文改错,急
My friend Harrison told me what he would like to be lawyer when he was at school.He worked very hard at his lessons,and tired to go to a famous university.And something unhappy happening in his family when he was sixteen,which made it necessary for him to make a living.While a young man,he had been a dustman,a bus driver,a waitress and asalesman.Life was every hard,but he was never gave up.He spent his spare time read a lot of books,and finally became a history teacher at a college.“Young people,"he often said,"are full of wishes and dreams after they step into society."
一共十个错误

told me what--told me that 从句中并未缺少成分
be lawyer--be a lawyer
And something unhappy---but something unhappy 从语境中理解,此处应为转折含义,他想去名校但是一些不幸的是发生了,所以用but
happening--happened 缺少动词,并非一个完整的句子
While a young man--when/while he was a young man
every hard--very hard 不知道是不是你打错了?
he was never gave up---去掉was
his spare time read--reading 固定搭配：spend time (in) doing sth.其中in可以省略
he often said--he often says 有了often应该用一般现在时吧
are full of wishes and dreams after they step into society--after改成before,上下文理解一下,我认为：年轻人在步入社会之前总是满怀希望和梦想的.
waitress--waiter 性别不对
自己观点,

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