希望帮我改一下我的英语作文,最好是英语不错的人!
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希望帮我改一下我的英语作文,最好是英语不错的人!
Dear Peter I am writing to ask whether you are able tu do me a favor.I want to have a pen pal,and I want my pen pal can have the same age as me so that we can have more topics to talk.There's no problem on sex,boys and girls are all good.It's wonderful if he or she has same hobbies as me.My hobbies are listening to music,watching movies and shopping.I'll very happy if you can find such a pen pal for me.I'm looking forward to receiving your letter!Best wishes!Best regards,Li hua.
Dear Peter I am writing to ask whether you are able tu do me a favor.I want to have a pen pal,and I want my pen pal can have the same age as me so that we can have more topics to talk.There's no problem on sex,boys and girls are all good.It's wonderful if he or she has same hobbies as me.My hobbies are listening to music,watching movies and shopping.I'll very happy if you can find such a pen pal for me.I'm looking forward to receiving your letter!Best wishes!Best regards,Li hua.
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