搜狗做题网『高分』【英语小演讲纠正】
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『高分』【英语小演讲纠正】
Hello everybody,today my topic is:
You have to believe in yourself .That's the secret of success.
It means 人必须相信自己,这是成功的秘诀.
Please read after me.(……)
Thank you everybody.Let me tell you something about this sentence.
In each person's life will meet many difficulties.
You have two kinds of choices.
You can insist or give up.
When you believe yourself and insist,You will success.
But if you give up,You will never success.
I hope that you can believe your selves and insist.
The hope and the success always around you.
Yesterday we learn:(……)
Please read after me:(……)
Who remember what is this mean?(……)
Oh!Yes,you are right!Congratulations!
That's all,thank you!
希望大家能牺牲自己的一点时间帮我看一看有什么语法错误或者用词错误.明天就要用了,50分做为答谢.
希望在结尾能帮我加一点句子,
Hello everybody,today my topic is:
You have to believe in yourself .That's the secret of success.
It means 人必须相信自己,这是成功的秘诀.
Please read after me.(……)
Thank you everybody.Let me tell you something about this sentence.
In each person's life will meet many difficulties.
You have two kinds of choices.
You can insist or give up.
When you believe yourself and insist,You will success.
But if you give up,You will never success.
I hope that you can believe your selves and insist.
The hope and the success always around you.
Yesterday we learn:(……)
Please read after me:(……)
Who remember what is this mean?(……)
Oh!Yes,you are right!Congratulations!
That's all,thank you!
希望大家能牺牲自己的一点时间帮我看一看有什么语法错误或者用词错误.明天就要用了,50分做为答谢.
希望在结尾能帮我加一点句子,
Hello everybody(ladies and gentlemen, 或boys and girls 这样说亲切点吧) today my topic is:
You must believe in yourself .That's the secret of success. (the secret of success is to believe in yourself, 一句话这么说也行）
It means 人必须相信自己,这是成功的秘诀.
Please read after me.(……)
Thank you all.Let me tell you something about this sentence.
In each person's life, we will meet many difficulties.
Facing those difficuties, you have two kinds of choices.
You can persist or give up.
When you believe in yourself and persist, You are most likely to success in the end.
But if you give up halfway, You will never succeed.
I hope that you can believe in yourself and be persistent.
then hope and success will be always around you.
Yesterday we learnt: (……)
Please read after me: (……)
Who remembers what this means?(……)
Oh! Yes, you are correct!
That's all, thank you!
以你的意思改了,把有些地方改得更得体实用些吧,希望你能有用,只是不知你要在结尾加什么,你都说谢谢了,可以结束了啊,再添些文绉绉的反与你简单的文体不协调,不是画蛇添足嘛
You must believe in yourself .That's the secret of success. (the secret of success is to believe in yourself, 一句话这么说也行）
It means 人必须相信自己,这是成功的秘诀.
Please read after me.(……)
Thank you all.Let me tell you something about this sentence.
In each person's life, we will meet many difficulties.
Facing those difficuties, you have two kinds of choices.
You can persist or give up.
When you believe in yourself and persist, You are most likely to success in the end.
But if you give up halfway, You will never succeed.
I hope that you can believe in yourself and be persistent.
then hope and success will be always around you.
Yesterday we learnt: (……)
Please read after me: (……)
Who remembers what this means?(……)
Oh! Yes, you are correct!
That's all, thank you!
以你的意思改了,把有些地方改得更得体实用些吧,希望你能有用,只是不知你要在结尾加什么,你都说谢谢了,可以结束了啊,再添些文绉绉的反与你简单的文体不协调,不是画蛇添足嘛