搜狗做题网看看我的英文自我介召,
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看看我的英文自我介召,
内容如下:
My name is XXX(保密).I'm twelve.I'm from Madiing Primary Shool
(麦顶小学),in Class 1 Grade 6.I very like electronic organ and
violin.I live Cangshang Xiatengru Roed(一条路名).My father is aengineer.My mother is a officer.I learn very hard.My lerning is very good.
看看我的英文自我介召,指出我的错误,敝人感激不尽
内容如下:
My name is XXX(保密).I'm twelve.I'm from Madiing Primary Shool
(麦顶小学),in Class 1 Grade 6.I very like electronic organ and
violin.I live Cangshang Xiatengru Roed(一条路名).My father is aengineer.My mother is a officer.I learn very hard.My lerning is very good.
看看我的英文自我介召,指出我的错误,敝人感激不尽
基本没有大问题.
有两个地方建议您修改一下：
1.I'm from Class1,Grade6,Maiding Primary School(英语从小到大来的)
2.I like electronic organ and violin very much.
3.I live in ****街
4.My father is an engineer.
5.I am working very hard and my study is very good.
有两个地方建议您修改一下：
1.I'm from Class1,Grade6,Maiding Primary School(英语从小到大来的)
2.I like electronic organ and violin very much.
3.I live in ****街
4.My father is an engineer.
5.I am working very hard and my study is very good.