搜狗做题网大家好 请帮忙点评一下 BEC 中级的作文谢谢了, part one !
来源：学生作业帮 编辑：搜狗做题网作业帮 分类：英语作业 时间：2024/08/11 10:31:58
大家好 请帮忙点评一下 BEC 中级的作文谢谢了, part one !
To: All staff
from: derek
Subject: computer system
I have just been informed the computer system will be down on next wednesday 1
o'clock Pm ,it will be down for at least 3 hours, so please make sure that all works are done before 1 pm, hope the computers will run faster than they used to be.
Thanks
To: All staff
from: derek
Subject: computer system
I have just been informed the computer system will be down on next wednesday 1
o'clock Pm ,it will be down for at least 3 hours, so please make sure that all works are done before 1 pm, hope the computers will run faster than they used to be.
Thanks
格式正确,要点全面,建议您做一下完善：
1、inform引导的宾从添加引导词that
2、on next Wednesday和1 o'clock Pm之间添加at,即at 1pm
3、习惯表达：Wednesday首字母W大写；下午一点整直接1：00p.m.即可
4、句间关系有点混乱需要划分标点,句子中首字母大写
5、It will be与for时态矛盾,建议调整统一为一种时态.
6、make sure一句中时态改为将来完成比较符合.仅供参考,
再问： make sure 怎么改成将来完成时啊
1、inform引导的宾从添加引导词that
2、on next Wednesday和1 o'clock Pm之间添加at,即at 1pm
3、习惯表达：Wednesday首字母W大写；下午一点整直接1：00p.m.即可
4、句间关系有点混乱需要划分标点,句子中首字母大写
5、It will be与for时态矛盾,建议调整统一为一种时态.
6、make sure一句中时态改为将来完成比较符合.仅供参考,
再问： make sure 怎么改成将来完成时啊