我直接抄自己写的那部分了,求改正：

我直接抄自己写的那部分了,求改正：
I know you have problems in learning Chinese.But don't worry about it,I can help you.These are some suggestions that may help you.First,you should try to talk with others as much as possible.It can improve your spoken English.Second,you could also read some Chinese books ang watch Chinese programs.Third,you should buy some grammar books and do much wirting practice to improve your writing skills.
In fact ,it's not difficult to learn Chinese well if you work hard.You should feel good about yourself.And I'll help you whenever you meet problems.

I know you have problems in learning Chinese.But don't worry,I can help you.These are some suggestions that may help you.First,you should try to talk with others as much as possible.It can improve your spoken English.Second,you could also read some Chinese books ang watch Chinese programs.Third,you should buy some grammar books and do much wirting practice to improve your writing skills.
In fact ,it's not difficult to learn Chinese well if you work hard.You should feel good about yourself.And I'll help you whenever you meet problems.
I know that
about it 去掉
these 改成 there
spoken English 应该是oral Chinese
watch Chinese TV programs
I recommend you the TV play named "Home with Kids"（《家有儿女》）
third 改成 What's more
meet 改成 have
改完是
I know that you have several problems in learning Chinese.But don't worry about it,I can help you.There are some suggestions that may help you.First,you should try to talk with others as much as possible.It can improve your oral Chinese.Second,you could also read some Chinese books ang watch Chinese TV programs.I recommend you the TV play named "Home with Kids".What's more,you should buy some grammar books and do much wirting practice to improve your writing skills.
In fact ,it's not difficult to learn Chinese well if you work hard.You should feel good about yourself.And I'll help you whenever you have problems.
祝好!
【来自英语牛人团】
再问： …… 是找一处语法错误，大神有木有啊，没有也请指明，感谢！
再答： spoken English 应该是oral Chinese don't worry about it about it 去掉 ang 改成 and 这应该就是主要错误了 别的真没什么 请采纳为满意答案 点击“采纳为满意答案”的按钮，谢谢！有问题追问
再问： 能不能用spoken Chinese呢，为什么？ 如果回答的靠谱，就采纳你了！
再答： spoken Chinese 也可以 表示口语 但是有点chiglish ，oral Chinese是最标准的 你也可以查一下