英语演讲稿 The people I admire most

英语演讲稿 The people I admire most
The people I admire most Good morning!Ladies and gentleman!Today I will introduce a person who I admire most.He created Apple at the age of 21.But he was fired by his own company when he was 30.He was invited to his own company 11 years later.And he earned 309 million dollars in a year.Who made this miracle?It is Steve Jobs,the people I admired most.I admire him because he was a perfectionist.All his products are nearly prefect.And there is a well-known story.Steve Jobs wanted to make his products as nice as possible.He even asked the candy design expert for help.That’s why products from Apple are fine.I think just because Steve Jobs was a perfectionist.So don’t be satisfied so easily.Try to improve your work and practice more.You know practice makes perfect.Secondly I admire him because he made his life different.As he said ‘I stumbled into by following my curiosity and intuition turned out to be priceless later on.’ No one knows what will happen to him in the future.Yes,we are all ordinary humans.If you want to have a comfortable future,you must work hard.So begin working hard now.Yes,Steve Jobs was the giant of the information age.And he efected me a lot.I admire him not only because he created many products which are convenient but also because he set a good example to us.We are teenagers who often have heroes.And the hero can influence us in many ways.I think when I knew Steve Jobs,I started to work harder.Because I want to make my work as perfect as it could be.I started to learn many things and do many things I like,just because of his words.I also want to make my life different.Because of him,I think I’m trying hard.I will work hard to achieve these goals.Because Steve Jobs was kind of that person.He was dead.But he will always be in my heart!
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大体上可以　可以参考　“苹果CEO乔布斯在斯坦福大学的演讲”