搜狗做题网【高悬赏】求修改英文作文文法 1
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【高悬赏】求修改英文作文文法 1
beHERO charity run,it was the first time I participated in off campus race.Owing to tension and excitement, I felt tossing and turning whole night.When the alarm rang,I did my best to keep my mental state properly.On account of overrated my time managed ability,I was almost late.There was no enough time for me to wear the sportswear.I just had the time to wear my clothes and it was too late to wore sports pants.Therefore,I became neither fish nor fowl as well as I wore a thick trouser and began the competition.
“Lost time is never found again”,this sentence reflected my true portrayal.I dragged my exhausted body and forced to run for 10km.
Just gave me a minute, I could wear all of my sportswear. But nonetheless, one minute, which my qualification will be canceled directly.I immediately ran to the starting point.Needless ten seconds, ‘Bang’,the gun shot and the game began.
There was no doubting a test of physical and mental,repeatedly challenge my limit.Went halfway, I had conceived a lot of ideas and most of them which tend to give up.In addition to the whole night I did not sleep,ill battle also was the major cause bring the unbearable weight to my body.I had been sick for two weeks because of a cold.At that time I was continuously shifting down and seeing the competitors who caught up my rank again and again.But consequently,I sped up and finished the race at 52:35.This achievement result was worse than my imagination around ten minutes.
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beHERO charity run,it was the first time I participated in off campus race.Owing to tension and excitement, I felt tossing and turning whole night.When the alarm rang,I did my best to keep my mental state properly.On account of overrated my time managed ability,I was almost late.There was no enough time for me to wear the sportswear.I just had the time to wear my clothes and it was too late to wore sports pants.Therefore,I became neither fish nor fowl as well as I wore a thick trouser and began the competition.
“Lost time is never found again”,this sentence reflected my true portrayal.I dragged my exhausted body and forced to run for 10km.
Just gave me a minute, I could wear all of my sportswear. But nonetheless, one minute, which my qualification will be canceled directly.I immediately ran to the starting point.Needless ten seconds, ‘Bang’,the gun shot and the game began.
There was no doubting a test of physical and mental,repeatedly challenge my limit.Went halfway, I had conceived a lot of ideas and most of them which tend to give up.In addition to the whole night I did not sleep,ill battle also was the major cause bring the unbearable weight to my body.I had been sick for two weeks because of a cold.At that time I was continuously shifting down and seeing the competitors who caught up my rank again and again.But consequently,I sped up and finished the race at 52:35.This achievement result was worse than my imagination around ten minutes.
下篇是：http://zhidao.baidu.com/question/264093525908608605.html#
这裏的是上篇
请求全篇修改
如果是我会这么写,你写的偶就.......
I still remember my first experience of participating a charity run vividly. The night before, I had trouble go to sleep owing to overexcitement. When my alarm went off the next morning, I still felt drowsy and unable to think straight. What made things worse was that I overestimated my speed, as a result I barely made it to the race without fitting sports gear.
"Lost time is never found again" Benjamin Franklin was quite right with this statement. Because of my mismanagement of time, I must look ridiculous in front of crowds at that time. If I could be spared another minute to put on my sportswear, I would look a lot more decent. But there was no time for me to regret as I had to pull myself together and got ready for the 10 km race.
After the race began, I realized it was a competition in both physical and mental aspects, in order to win, I need to push myself beyond my body limits. Halfway through the game, I felt my body want to give way. Insufficient rest from last night and the cold I caught two weeks ago seriously weakened my mentality. I watched in desperation that other players took me over one by one. In the end I completed the race in 52 minutes 35 seconds which was 10 minutes longer than I expected.
I still remember my first experience of participating a charity run vividly. The night before, I had trouble go to sleep owing to overexcitement. When my alarm went off the next morning, I still felt drowsy and unable to think straight. What made things worse was that I overestimated my speed, as a result I barely made it to the race without fitting sports gear.
"Lost time is never found again" Benjamin Franklin was quite right with this statement. Because of my mismanagement of time, I must look ridiculous in front of crowds at that time. If I could be spared another minute to put on my sportswear, I would look a lot more decent. But there was no time for me to regret as I had to pull myself together and got ready for the 10 km race.
After the race began, I realized it was a competition in both physical and mental aspects, in order to win, I need to push myself beyond my body limits. Halfway through the game, I felt my body want to give way. Insufficient rest from last night and the cold I caught two weeks ago seriously weakened my mentality. I watched in desperation that other players took me over one by one. In the end I completed the race in 52 minutes 35 seconds which was 10 minutes longer than I expected.