申请信
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书面表达 假如你是李华,你校校刊“Our step”的招聘启事引起了你的兴趣,请根据下列信息用英文写一封申请信。 姓名:李华 性别:男 年龄:16 年纪:高一 兴趣:摄影 写作 户外运动 其他:活泼、开朗、精力充沛;曾获北京市摄影比赛青少年组二等奖 应聘目的:参加社会实践活动,丰富业余生活 注意:词数不少于60 可根据需要适当增加细节 Dear Harry, I am writing to apply for the photographer for Our Step.I am a schoolboy ,my name is li hua,I am a student in our school garde one.I havea lot of hobbies,such as photographer,wtiting,outdoor sports andso on.My frinends described me who is a vivid,cheerful and energyis full.And I winned the second prize of teenagers with photographer.Iwant to join this team very much,because,I think it can accumulate a wealth of experience and enrich my experience of life. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 希望老师可以帮我改正我作文里的错误,您能不帮我把一些简单的句子改成高级语法,O(∩_∩)O谢谢!
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解题思路: 书面表达
解题过程:
I am writing to apply for the photographer for Our Step.I am a schoolboy ,my name is li hua,I am a student in our school garde one. 这句话少了连词,而且还有些重复和句意不对,但是可以改成包含更多知识点的句子。(I am a schoolboy, named Li Hua, who was in grade one)I havea lot of hobbies,such as photographer,wtiting,outdoor sports andso on.My frinends described me who is a vivid这句话语意不对,而且describe应该这样使用describe sth/ sb as/ to be ---(described me to be vivid),cheerful and energyis full (full of energy).And I winned(过去式的形式错误,应该用won) the second prize of teenagers with photographer.Iwant to join this team very much,because,I think it can accumulate a wealth of experience and enrich my experience(这里的意思是经历,用复数形式) of life.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
整体而言,这是一篇不错的文章。虽然有一些不足之处,但我觉得如果在考试之中,你也可以避免的。还有,我已经尽量把句子改成复杂的句子了,但是请要注意,可不是每个句子都可以转成复杂的句子的,那是由咱们想要表达的意思来决定的。希望我的解释能令你满意,祝你学习进步!
最终答案:略
解题过程:
I am writing to apply for the photographer for Our Step.I am a schoolboy ,my name is li hua,I am a student in our school garde one. 这句话少了连词,而且还有些重复和句意不对,但是可以改成包含更多知识点的句子。(I am a schoolboy, named Li Hua, who was in grade one)I havea lot of hobbies,such as photographer,wtiting,outdoor sports andso on.My frinends described me who is a vivid这句话语意不对,而且describe应该这样使用describe sth/ sb as/ to be ---(described me to be vivid),cheerful and energyis full (full of energy).And I winned(过去式的形式错误,应该用won) the second prize of teenagers with photographer.Iwant to join this team very much,because,I think it can accumulate a wealth of experience and enrich my experience(这里的意思是经历,用复数形式) of life.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
整体而言,这是一篇不错的文章。虽然有一些不足之处,但我觉得如果在考试之中,你也可以避免的。还有,我已经尽量把句子改成复杂的句子了,但是请要注意,可不是每个句子都可以转成复杂的句子的,那是由咱们想要表达的意思来决定的。希望我的解释能令你满意,祝你学习进步!
最终答案:略