搜狗做题网【悬赏20】高一短文改错
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【悬赏20】高一短文改错
It has been half a year when ZhangKe came to our class.In the first day in our class,she didn't know anyone and she had no one to talk to."Hi",I greeted her with a smile.Surprising but happy,she nodded to me in friendly way.Later,she told me that she juet moved to the small town with his family.Now we often go to school together.We sometime call each other on Sundays.It comes as no surprise that we have become good friend.She often says,"I don't think I'm very lucky to have you as a friend.You make me feel good and happily."
It has been half a year when ZhangKe came to our class.In the first day in our class,she didn't know anyone and she had no one to talk to."Hi",I greeted her with a smile.Surprising but happy,she nodded to me in friendly way.Later,she told me that she juet moved to the small town with his family.Now we often go to school together.We sometime call each other on Sundays.It comes as no surprise that we have become good friend.She often says,"I don't think I'm very lucky to have you as a friend.You make me feel good and happily."
It has been half a year when ZhangKe came to our class.
这里的when应该改成since
In the first day in our class
In 改成on
she didn't know anyone
anyone 改成anybody
Surprising but happy,
surprising 改成surprised
in friendly way.
改成in a friendly way
she juet moved to the small town with his family
juet改成just
his改成her
We sometime call each other
sometime改成sometimes
It comes as no surprise that we have become good friend.
It is no surprise that...
friend改成是friends
You make me feel good and happily
happily改成happy
这里的when应该改成since
In the first day in our class
In 改成on
she didn't know anyone
anyone 改成anybody
Surprising but happy,
surprising 改成surprised
in friendly way.
改成in a friendly way
she juet moved to the small town with his family
juet改成just
his改成her
We sometime call each other
sometime改成sometimes
It comes as no surprise that we have become good friend.
It is no surprise that...
friend改成是friends
You make me feel good and happily
happily改成happy