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My favorite famous people is Micheal Jakson.I really want to meet him.
You know,he is a famous successful dancer in the world.Everyone know him.So I really want to meet this legend people.
And then,I will beg him to teach me some dance movements.I have dreamed that for a long time.
Finally,I’m sure I will tell him clearly how deeply I love him.I think this is my best chance to explain I admire him and love him.
But,you know,I’m hopelessness he has been dead.Of course,he live in my heart forever.
英语作文改错My favorite famous people is Micheal Jakson.I really w
My favorite famous people is Micheal Jakson.I really want to meet him.
You know,he 【was】 a famous successful dancer in the world.Everyone 【knows】 him.So I really want to meet this legend people.
And then,I will beg him to teach me some dance movements.I have dreamed that for a long time.
Finally,I’m sure I will tell him clearly how deeply I love him.I think this is my best chance to 【express my admire and love to him】.
But,you know,I’m 【hopeless,for】 he has 【died】.Of course,he 【lives】 in my heart forever.
大致改了下词,语法上虽然没问题,但在表达上还可以有改进