搜狗做题网英语作文Saving The Face
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英语作文Saving The Face
Saving The Face
内容：一个小短文,讲的是Smith先生星期六外出钓鱼,天气不错,他没钓到鱼,回去怕被老婆骂或者他觉得没面子就去买了一条鱼,很高兴的回去了,并幻想着老婆的夸奖.
要求：100词左右...
Saving The Face
内容：一个小短文,讲的是Smith先生星期六外出钓鱼,天气不错,他没钓到鱼,回去怕被老婆骂或者他觉得没面子就去买了一条鱼,很高兴的回去了,并幻想着老婆的夸奖.
要求：100词左右...
On one Saturday,Mr Smith went fishing on a clear day.Unluckily,he caught nothing.When considering that her wife would laugh at him,he had to have a fish in order to save the face.
When passing by the fish shop,he came up with an idea that I can buy a fish for my wife.
On his way home ,he thought that she would be happy when his wife saw the fish.
Mr Smith was unlucky.He get a frozen fish from the fish shop,but he didin't know it.Giving his wife the fish,he was abused by his wife.The reason is simple.The fish is a frozen one.How he could get a frozen fish from the river.That's obviously impossible.
Then Mr Smith knows that Saving the face is a bad idea.Not only can it waste much money,but also it can't save the face anyway.
我又对文章做了以下的改动.
1,增添了买到冻鱼的经过,故事不显的的太唐突
2,化一个复合句为短句,因为之前文章符合句过多.
3,增添了一句议论,点出了要面子的危害.
4,词数扩充到了150词.
5,用了have ,get ,a bad idea,更符合英语规范,更有英语的味道.
希望楼主随便采纳我的100字或150字的文章,都可以,楼主加分啊.
When passing by the fish shop,he came up with an idea that I can buy a fish for my wife.
On his way home ,he thought that she would be happy when his wife saw the fish.
Mr Smith was unlucky.He get a frozen fish from the fish shop,but he didin't know it.Giving his wife the fish,he was abused by his wife.The reason is simple.The fish is a frozen one.How he could get a frozen fish from the river.That's obviously impossible.
Then Mr Smith knows that Saving the face is a bad idea.Not only can it waste much money,but also it can't save the face anyway.
我又对文章做了以下的改动.
1,增添了买到冻鱼的经过,故事不显的的太唐突
2,化一个复合句为短句,因为之前文章符合句过多.
3,增添了一句议论,点出了要面子的危害.
4,词数扩充到了150词.
5,用了have ,get ,a bad idea,更符合英语规范,更有英语的味道.
希望楼主随便采纳我的100字或150字的文章,都可以,楼主加分啊.