搜狗做题网英语写作基础问题,请写作高手指教!这里小女子有礼了
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英语写作基础问题,请写作高手指教!这里小女子有礼了
Ⅰ.Revise the following sentences according to the requirement
1.The plan began to shake noticeably as soon as it lifted off the runway.(periodic sentence)
2.James Joyce's Ulysses,a long and complicated novel and which is on our reading list,has been banned by the school board.(parallel structure)
2,两题的答案,这里小女子有礼了!
Ⅰ.Revise the following sentences according to the requirement
1.The plan began to shake noticeably as soon as it lifted off the runway.(periodic sentence)
2.James Joyce's Ulysses,a long and complicated novel and which is on our reading list,has been banned by the school board.(parallel structure)
2,两题的答案,这里小女子有礼了!
1.On lifting off the runway,the plane began to shake noticeably.(periodic sentence以前还真没听说过,查了下资料,感觉就是将表伴随的状语部分独立出来放在句子开头- -!这样改觉得有点牵强)
2.James Joyce's Ulysses is a long and complicated novel,is on our reading list,but has been banned by the school board.
2.James Joyce's Ulysses is a long and complicated novel,is on our reading list,but has been banned by the school board.