搜狗做题网谁帮我看一下这两篇英语短文有没有语病?
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谁帮我看一下这两篇英语短文有没有语病?
1、New Year comes again in an blink of an eye,I am very happy because I am going to be one year elder.14 years old,or an unknown world,also must be full of ups and downs.However,I really look forward of the new year
2、A new year is coming again .I am very happy because I will be one year elder ,14 years old .An unknown world is waiting for me ,there will be successes and failures ,however ,i really look forward to the adventure of the new year.
1、New Year comes again in an blink of an eye,I am very happy because I am going to be one year elder.14 years old,or an unknown world,also must be full of ups and downs.However,I really look forward of the new year
2、A new year is coming again .I am very happy because I will be one year elder ,14 years old .An unknown world is waiting for me ,there will be successes and failures ,however ,i really look forward to the adventure of the new year.
an blink
14 years old,or an unknown world,also must be full of ups and downs.
look forward of
adventure of the new year 这句最要命,错误很明显,两处.
建议你自己修改,能改掉自己的错误,才会真正进步.另:你这两个文章读起来很"中文",有很多虽然不是语法错误,但是很别扭,不象英文,还要加强训练啊
14 years old,or an unknown world,also must be full of ups and downs.
look forward of
adventure of the new year 这句最要命,错误很明显,两处.
建议你自己修改,能改掉自己的错误,才会真正进步.另:你这两个文章读起来很"中文",有很多虽然不是语法错误,但是很别扭,不象英文,还要加强训练啊