老师请您帮我看看这段话什么地方有问题,应该怎么改正呢?

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老师请您帮我看看这段话什么地方有问题,应该怎么改正呢?
I’ve learnt the news that this year Central has approved atwo-year MFA route for Scenography. That was exciting news indeed for I amreally interested in it. I am eager to join the MFA programme, because I hopethat I can spend more time to study with you and my future classmates so that Ican gain a better understanding of culture from different places. I am alsolonging to share my feelings and understanding of Chinese culture with you andmy future classmate. I am expecting for your views and comments about them, andI do believe that the communication between different cultures get togethercould create amazing inspirations.
谢谢老师.

简单改了几处,供参考
第三行spend more time to study改为spend more time studying
第五行with you and my future classmate改为with you and them
I expecting for 改为looking forWard to
第六行改为about my ideas
I do believe that the intercultural communication could create amazing inspirations.

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